Tuesday, 21 March 2017

Unit 9 task 2b

3 comments:

  1. You have understood about the three purposes of continuity editing, drawing on examples. These examples could perhaps be developed a little further with better use of media technical language. Vanessa

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  2. The changes i have made are in yellow

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  3. Some improvements made here Ricardo with more careful and thoughtful use of media terminology. V

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