This is a well written evaluation Ricardo and you are clear and realistic on strengths and weaknesses. You could be more specific at times. What was the original aim of the video and how well did you achieve this?? Did you promote / raise awareness as well as you would have liked? You could have been clearer on aspects of the story that changed too- this is rather vague. What was the audience feedback? Evaluate editing. Vanessa
This is a well written evaluation Ricardo and you are clear and realistic on strengths and weaknesses. You could be more specific at times. What was the original aim of the video and how well did you achieve this?? Did you promote / raise awareness as well as you would have liked? You could have been clearer on aspects of the story that changed too- this is rather vague. What was the audience feedback? Evaluate editing. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteThe changes and additions i have made are in yellow on the second draft of the evaluation
DeleteThis is clearer now Ricardo.
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