This is a decent start Ricardo with some well chosen examples. I would have liked to see more detailed analysis of mise en scene. You could have also been clearer about the depth of field shot in camera, and more on editing such as the cutting rate and use of captions. Vanessa
This is a decent start Ricardo with some well chosen examples. I would have liked to see more detailed analysis of mise en scene. You could have also been clearer about the depth of field shot in camera, and more on editing such as the cutting rate and use of captions. Vanessa
ReplyDeletethe changes i have made are in red
ReplyDeleteThis is improved and you have clearly indicated where / how you've done this. Well done!
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