Ricardo you attempt to follow the structure and have picked an interesting drama to analyse. You could elaborate on representations- what are the connotations of the costumes etc? And you could expand on the narrative (linear / non-linear and how it develops). You could add more detailed examples and stills to illustrate. Vanessa
Ricardo you attempt to follow the structure and have picked an interesting drama to analyse. You could elaborate on representations- what are the connotations of the costumes etc? And you could expand on the narrative (linear / non-linear and how it develops). You could add more detailed examples and stills to illustrate.
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The changes I have made are in orange
ReplyDeleteYou have made some improvements but still no stills and you are unclear on connotations.
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